pavlor is the one of the earliest behavorists in the planet. he did the experiments with the dogs that when bell rings, he feed the dogs and after this experiments, when the bell rings, the dogs expected the foods. it's physical condition thinks their are foods these experiments contribute the physical of behaviorism, because it's behavior change dogs conditioning and it's one of the main point of the behaviorism. the behavior simulated dogs condition and it changes dogs brain because of environmant
Honestly, if you didn't write this script, I wouldn't be able to understand a word you said! You need to work on your delivery! Slow down and take the necessary time to pronounce the words. Also, focus on word stress. Without good delivery, it doesn't matter how good or bad your grammar is. If the rater can't understand what you're saying, there is no way to hear if your grammar or topic development is good. Grammar corrections below:
pavlor is one of the earliest behavorists on the planet. he did the experiments with dogs that when a bell rang, he fed the dogs. And after this experiment, when the bell rang, but food was not given to them, the dogs expected the food and salivated. it's physical condition thinks their are foods these experiments contribute the physical of behaviorism, because it's behavior change dogs conditioning and it's one of the main point of the behaviorism. (I can't understand this. Is it one sentence or two or three?) the behavior simulated dogs condition and it changes dogs brain because of environmant
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pavlor is the one of the earliest behavorists in the planet. he did the experiments with the dogs that when bell rings, he feed the dogs and after this experiments, when the bell rings, the dogs expected the foods. it's physical condition thinks their are foods these experiments contribute the physical of behaviorism, because it's behavior change dogs conditioning and it's one of the main point of the behaviorism. the behavior simulated dogs condition and it changes dogs brain because of environmant
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Honestly, if you didn't write this script, I wouldn't be able to understand a word you said! You need to work on your delivery! Slow down and take the necessary time to pronounce the words. Also, focus on word stress. Without good delivery, it doesn't matter how good or bad your grammar is. If the rater can't understand what you're saying, there is no way to hear if your grammar or topic development is good. Grammar corrections below:
pavlor is one of the earliest behavorists on the planet. he did the experiments with dogs that when a bell rang, he fed the dogs. And after this experiment, when the bell rang, but food was not given to them, the dogs expected the food and salivated. it's physical condition thinks their are foods these experiments contribute the physical of behaviorism, because it's behavior change dogs conditioning and it's one of the main point of the behaviorism. (I can't understand this. Is it one sentence or two or three?) the behavior simulated dogs condition and it changes dogs brain because of environmant
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