the woman's problem is sho can't get all the classes she want in the spring period . the man's suggest is take the classes at the summer but she have to work in her parent's restourant, so she can't make any time. the second suggestion of the man is get a springcourses at the community college but she says it's evening time and she's not sure to make a time that for a classes. i think second suggestion is better way to solve the problem because she can make the time better spring than te summer because in summer she have to working on a restourant.
Get the frog out of your throat and speak up! Again, your delivery is what kills you on these responses!
Additionally you are making grammar mistakes which ultimately affect your ability to communicate effectively. My corrections are below:
the woman's problem is that sho can't get all the classes she wants in the spring period . the man's suggestion is to take the class during the summer but she has to work in her parent's restourant, so she doesn't have any time in the summer. the second suggestion of the man is to take a spring course at the community college but she says it's evening time and she's not sure if she can make it at that time for a class. i think the second suggestion is a better way to solve the problem because she can attend class more easily in the spring than in the summer because in the summer she has to work in a restourant.
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the woman's problem is sho can't get all the classes she want in the spring period . the man's suggest is take the classes at the summer but she have to work in her parent's restourant, so she can't make any time. the second suggestion of the man is get a springcourses at the community college but she says it's evening time and she's not sure to make a time that for a classes. i think second suggestion is better way to solve the problem because she can make the time better spring than te summer because in summer she have to working on a restourant.
Sung-Ho
Get the frog out of your throat and speak up! Again, your delivery is what kills you on these responses!
Additionally you are making grammar mistakes which ultimately affect your ability to communicate effectively. My corrections are below:
the woman's problem is that sho can't get all the classes she wants in the spring period . the man's suggestion is to take the class during the summer but she has to work in her parent's restourant, so she doesn't have any time in the summer. the second suggestion of the man is to take a spring course at the community college but she says it's evening time and she's not sure if she can make it at that time for a class. i think the second suggestion is a better way to solve the problem because she can attend class more easily in the spring than in the summer because in the summer she has to work in a restourant.
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