the man disagree with school's anouncement. first he saids the parking cost increases and annual permit increases and fee increases make student to pay for to building parking lot and it'sunfair to students. and he also saids that schools steps can park on original parking lot and it's also unfair to students. and he says the new parking lot is much bigger than school needs the last one is when they park in the new parking area, it's to far away form the class so they can late in the class. because of these reasons, he disagree with school's announcement
First of all, when you write your scripts, use proper punctuation and capitalization! It's annoying to have to fix every tiny little mistake if you are just being too lazy to capitalize and punctuate!
Overall Score: 3
You did better on this one than on the others. I think your delivery is slower and easier to understand than some of your later responses. Maybe you were in a hurry to get finished? Anyway, this one is much better in regards to delivery. There are still some grammar issues. My corrections follow:
The man disagrees with school's announcement. First he says the parking cost has been increased and annual permit cost has increased and the fee increased (These are all the same things) which now requires students to pay for the new parking lot. The man says that this is unfair to students. and he also says that the school's staff can park in the original parking lot. And he says the new parking lot is much bigger than what the school needs. The last reason the man gives for his displeasure with the announcement is when they park in the new parking area, it's to far away from the class so they can easily be late for class. because of these reasons, he disagrees with the school's announcement
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the man disagree with school's anouncement. first he saids the parking cost increases and annual permit increases and fee increases make student to pay for to building parking lot and it'sunfair to students. and he also saids that schools steps can park on original parking lot and it's also unfair to students. and he says the new parking lot is much bigger than school needs the last one is when they park in the new parking area, it's to far away form the class so they can late in the class. because of these reasons, he disagree with school's announcement
Sung-Ho,
First of all, when you write your scripts, use proper punctuation and capitalization! It's annoying to have to fix every tiny little mistake if you are just being too lazy to capitalize and punctuate!
Overall Score: 3
You did better on this one than on the others. I think your delivery is slower and easier to understand than some of your later responses. Maybe you were in a hurry to get finished? Anyway, this one is much better in regards to delivery. There are still some grammar issues. My corrections follow:
The man disagrees with school's announcement. First he says the parking cost has been increased and annual permit cost has increased and the fee increased (These are all the same things) which now requires students to pay for the new parking lot. The man says that this is unfair to students. and he also says that the school's staff can park in the original parking lot. And he says the new parking lot is much bigger than what the school needs. The last reason the man gives for his displeasure with the announcement is when they park in the new parking area, it's to far away from the class so they can easily be late for class. because of these reasons, he disagrees with the school's announcement
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